The Earthquake...
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It was the 19/10/2012 and the Tides Hotel Tour was open I went in with my Girlfriend Mary and a few friends... We got inside and it was marvelous.We then went into a room which had a TV I turned it on and I turned it the channel to vintage porn... As my Girlfriend was in disgust the Tour Guide had to kick me out.

As I waited outside for Mary and my friends the ground started to shake as the ground trembled I got worried but I had to do as I was told or the Police would arrest me so I stayed put... Later I noticed something wasnt right and then suddenly the Tides Hotel crashed down immediatly after that the president wanted volunteers to help save the people, Ofcourse I volunteered to save them because in there was my precious Mary.

I then came with an axe and tried to smash my way in there I then found a way in so all the trained firemen went in first then I went in and at that moment another tremor occured crushing my arm inbetween the rocks and also the ceiling fell ontop of the firemen... I couldnt move... My friend Tank who also volunteered tried to help me but my arm wouldnt budge so he said"We're going to have to amputate your arm" I said"Okay... But make it quick!" The pressure put on Tank was too much and he then fainted,I tried to awaken him but he was out cold... Another fireman got in and managed to give them some explosives just before being crushed by the supports the people inside used the explosives to get past one part... Then a man called Vandermere said to me " You gotta get outta here" I replied "I cant my arm is stuck" He had no choice to blow up the next part whilst I was still there "Are you sure you want to do this" He said,I replied" Yes blow it I cant bare the pain".

The man blew up the blockade and then I was unconcious for about ten minutes... I woke up to see how many died and then to see Vandermere with Mary in his arms... She was dead and the only thing that made me happy was that I knew I was going to meet her... In Heaven.

By MattyG56

Thanks for reading this story.

All events in this story are True.

This story is dedicated to the people who died during the tragedy.
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Nice work, keep up and try to improve.

Good to see an interest in developing roleplay stories.
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(10-20-2012, 05:51 PM)Adman Wrote: Nice work, keep up and try to improve.

Good to see an interest in developing roleplay stories.

Yeah thx... For some reason I enjoy doing the stories cause it makes me think.


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