02-08-2015, 03:33 AM
(This post was last modified: 09-01-2022, 01:03 AM by Fearless Community.
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EvoTV-Reporter RP could have been improved through avoiding too much slang and inappropriate language as we do not really associate that on real tv news. It could have also been more descriptive whilst describing the event to create vivid imagery and allow the citizens to visualize the situation at hand. However, all in all it was good rp'ing.