What do you think of this intro?

[ChrilLe]

Sorry bro, don't wanna hurt ya' but it's simply bad. It's the same intro you see with most amateur YouTubers; A colorful background, dust particles, a bouncing text and typically dupstep, techno or house. It's the same shit everyday.

You have the talent to actually use that software, so if I were you, put some more work into, bite a pillow if it gets too frustrating. Try to make somethin... unique.