12-17-2012, 07:53 PM
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(12-17-2012, 05:03 PM)whoopie Wrote:A letter is given to the Leader by his Top Advisor.
Good day sir.
My name is Simon J. Berry, speaking from the GB Underground Organization.
I have seen that you're very powerful and I thought, maybe we could be allies!
I'm the Leader of a very powerful organization, so we might form a good couple.
Wouldn't that look bloody good to you?
Greetings,
Simon J. Williams
OOC: I have just started my clan, but it would be great to be allies with you.
We are going to have to deny your pact on a couple of terms.
1. You have tried to offer ally pacts with numerous groups at the same time.
2. You say you are a powerful organization, but if this was true you wouldnt want an alliance with every single group.
3. If power is the only point you have to go off of for an alliance then I am sorry to say it wont get you far with anywhere.
4. Lastly the whole letter in my honest opinion isnt that forum at all. You basically said this in your letter, "You are powerful, we think we are powerful, lets make an alliance."
Sorry but for the time being this is going to be denied. If we decide to change our minds we will be in touch with you. You guys are a brand new clan so we do not want to put our necks out for you if we do not even know what we are getting into.
Also making letters bolded and triple the font size does not make it look nice.