04-09-2014, 06:18 PM
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(04-09-2014, 04:36 PM)Joey Skylynx Wrote:(04-09-2014, 02:43 PM)Doomdude1 Wrote: While admirable, points 4,5 and 6 are not in-character in any way.If I reword it to how Toxic worded it will it be alright?
The issue is in the fact that the thread is posted under "Roleplay". Offering services such as 5 and 6 (arguably 4 as well, but that can be adjusted accordingly) reaches clearly outside of the world of "in-character".
Now, what you could do, is remove the points of 5 and 6 (while heavily rewriting point 4) and placing a link to a separate "Off topic" thread, the link itself being in a spoiler.