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Just something I wrote - Barkles - 02-21-2014

Hi guys,

I wrote what could be called poetry but tbh I just wanted to express what I'm feeling



Spoiler :
Teenage pressure
I sit and I stare at the wall that is bare, ain't no sense in me to bear.
I wonder where I'm going to be, now I'm nearly 16, and what I don't get there
Would I die? Maybe would I battle through, in a constant gray must? Probably.

They say life is why you make of it, so what have I made if mine? A gamer with long hair, and not a care..

Doesn't help with life, but what can an addict do

When I game I have no pain, I have that rush.

Then the pain, with no refrain, hits me as it must.

Exams
Exams
More and more they pile, I cry for help, I push it away when I get it.

I wasn't always like this, I just started enjoying life is all.

But now all I can do is stare at this blank wall.




Judge it, Idm.

I just thought I'd share it as some guys ik like it Wink

Edit: ik it looks like the standard OTT dramatic teen, but that isn't the angle I was going for.

RE: Just something I wrote - Tandy - 02-22-2014

My life in a nutshell.

RE: Just something I wrote - Barkles - 02-22-2014

(02-22-2014, 09:22 PM)Tandy Wrote: My life in a nutshell.

Ik man, only thing that's keeping me going right now is my clan tbh.

RE: Just something I wrote - Haarek - 02-24-2014

I like it, besides, I feel like I can relate to it in a way. You should try to do more of these if you can!

RE: Just something I wrote - Barkles - 02-24-2014

(02-24-2014, 05:00 PM)Midget Wrote: I like it, besides, I feel like I can relate to it in a way. You should try to do more of these if you can!

Thanks man!
I have written some more, just not on a PC Wink
Edit: I found one languishing on my phone
Tbh I don't like it as much, but I'll let you guys be the judge


Spoiler :
Take a walk

Family's pounding my head... Just wanna go bed.

Revise!
That triggers something, but it's unfamiliar

You wanna escape, throw out all the hate, you can't

Suddenly you break.

Take a walk
Take a walk
I say to myself over and over
I feel my eyes grow heavy, myself falling.

I run for my keys, fall onto my knees, I'm at the door, out the door. I feel the hate no more.

The cold air licks at my face... Like a pup with the best happiness I can grace.

10 minutes later I'm back, then I feel the whip crack

REVISE REVISE
it's screaming now
45 day then you'll be made to pay

Here's some science

Here's some maths

I can't revise I cry, it's all Greek! I feel so very very weak.

So I just keep shouting in my mind like clockwork beginning to grind

Take. A. Walk.